I look to the sky on a damp fall morn,
The early blue heaven showed streaks
Clawed by many shades of gray.
Far off to the West were mountains
Waiting for the coming day
And above them was a floating rock:
The full glowing moon.
Just as the sun blew its waking horn
From behind the Eastern peaks,
The dim orb stopped; it had something to say:
Come to me, my child, so lost you are;
Here on the craters you will find righteous way.
It is only this globe that these earthly legs can walk
But up there – where it’s glowing – my thoughts forever loom.
beautiful scene
LOVE the photography,
it looks almost like a painting:)
“But up there – where it’s glowing – do my thoughts always loom.”- simply beautiful
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beautiful…
Happy Wednesday!
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welcome to poets rally week 34,
Glad that you reminded me of this link.
Happy Rally.
the imagery on this one is very beautiful!
I like 🙂
Sweetttttttt!
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Beautiful imagery! Love your choice of photograph for this too 🙂 Lovely poem!
beautiful I love the imagery portrayed within the flow of the poem! Happy Rally=D
Nature is eternally beautiful! Equally nice is the way you have described it 🙂
mine is here:
http://chinmay28.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/a-malignant-grief-2/
“…Far off to the West were mountains
Waiting for the coming day
And above them was a floating rock:
The full and glowing moon.” GREAT!!! ANOTHER KINDRED SPIRIT!
Thank you!
Love the imagery and the flow–thanks for this.
So beautiful, both picture and poem.
From my few visits to your blog I can see that you are passionate about nature and seem to find just the right phrases to help us see her in new ways. Lovely.
Victoria
I was struck by the way you gave the sun a voice with the phrase “waking horn”–what a great way to bring something so often describe through the sense of sight into the piece. Thanks for sharing this one!
Vivid…felt.
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